Wednesday, February 22, 2017

Big day out

Rabbit Island
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I see the water rising up and slapping back down onto the sand. It looks as if it's its try to pull all the sand back out to sea.

I hear the kids yelling with happiness. Kids running out of the water because its so cold creating loud

I feel like going home or do I.


  1. Hey Jack. Cool writing. I like the first sentence about the water rising up and slapping down onto the sand. :)

  2. Hi Jack,
    Great first sentence, I like the sea pulling the sand out, I noticed that after happiness theirs a full stop and no space or capital letter.
    From Nicole