Thursday, May 11, 2017

Going to the river

I walk onto the green slippery rocks of the speeding river stumbling as I get in, after cutting wood on a hot and humid day. As I get in my breath gets stolen. Finally I dive down under the water then quickly swim out because of the cold icy water.

I grab my towel so numb with coldness and dry off. With shaking hands I grab a handful of chips and stick them in my mouth. After everyone gets out we all get into our van and all drive home shaking and cold.

THE END     

1 comment:

  1. Hi Jack. This has some good parts to it, but needs some editing. See if you can fix it up...